The rest of a campaign

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D47 settled the storyline before drawing. Everything else here follows decisions already made: D12 for confirmations, D14 for analytics, D20 for what a much-visited page may say.

Changed after your review

• The highlighted session row had its content against its edges, here and in every Sessions still in lane 2. A more specific rule had kept its side padding at nothing. Every row is padded at the sides now, so S14 and its date sit inside the highlight, line up with the rows around it, and the highlight stays within the column.
• “The story was not saved” sat almost on the Save button. It is above the buttons now, with room round it, and Save says “Save again”.
• Analytics mixed a tall phone screen with short panels in one row, leaving blocks of empty space. The four whole-page states are phone screens together; the five sharing states are a row of their own.
• Not for you now reads “You have strayed from the path”, with the plain line — whose page it is — beneath. Lane 5’s Prep page says the same.

Settled before drawing

• D47 — the story and the timeline. Milestones are entries on the timeline; the journal leaves, because a session’s notes live on the session (D30); the Wiki tab and the suggestions row go to the wiki.
• A series is managed from the Sessions list and from any of its sessions.
• The patterns sheet has no toasts. A confirmation or an undo appears where the action happened.

What rendering and the coverage check caught

The coverage check: 107 placements, none missing. 65 drawn, 10 replaced by a decision (mostly D47’s journal and wiki pieces), 5 behaviour, 27 belonging to other surfaces — SH-7 is a pattern many rows point at. The check is coverage/lane2c.py, committed on 21 September, when a strict second pass found three states the first tally had counted without a still — the story and a milestone mid-save, the milestone edit with all its fields, and sessions played in the last 30 days — all drawn now. The first draw had missed three, drawn now: the confirmation after making a series; the fields lane 2’s session form never drew for one (how long, and when it ends); and what the storyline says while a chapter is being written, when it fails, and when there is nothing new to add.

Rendering caught five:

1. “Early days” analytics said fewer than two sessions had been played, above a count of eleven.
2. The leave-without-saving dialog carried a designer’s note — “this asks on a tab switch too” — as if it were product text. It is in the caption now, where it belongs.
3. A campaign with no series still labelled every session “every other Monday”.
4. The series editor said Session 14 had been retitled; it has no title at all.
5. “Removed, with an undo” still listed the milestone it said had been removed.